Translation script/summary hybrid thingy thing.
Code:
(T) - thoughts
(text) - summary
New paragraph = new frame
Also, I shorten long names when indicating who’s speaking (i.e. Oo = Ookami)
[Page 1]
Cover.
[Page 2]
(Note on the door that the restaurant is closed)
Tora: Ookami...
[Page 3]
Tora: I’ll... // ...ask Mii what’s going on.
Oo: Don’t bother.
Tora: But what if it really is our fault?
Oo: Even if it is, // what could we do about it?
Oo: We’re only customers.
[Page 4]
Oo: The owner’s an old woman, // and the shop is worn down.
Oo: For it to disappear is just an instance of natural selection.
Tora: ...Is that really what you think?
Tora: I’m going home.
Tora: You’re a jerk, Ookami.
[Page 5]
Shi: Hey...
Shi: You okay?
Mii: ...Yeah.
Shi: Want to eat something? // It’s 4 o’clock already.
Flashback: It’s okay to cry.
Flash: You’re just a highschool girl, right?
[Page 6]
I cried.
A lot.
And in front of this guy.
Shi: Ah, this is good.
Mii: Yeah. I think this taste is mustard and balsamic vinegar...
Shi: Ohh...
Shi: That’s impressive. Can you tell what the ingredients are from just a taste?
Mii: Oh, I’m sorry. // It’s just a habit!
Shi: Why are you apologizing?
[Page 7]
Mii: We’re in the middle of eating, // and yet I’m analyzing the ingredients and stuff...
Shi: I don’t really mind? // Isn’t this just a part of your personality? It makes you interesting.
Flashback: Personality.
Flash: It’s that thing called personality.
Flash: Everyone’s lacking in some aspects.
Flash: We all live trying to compensate for our short-comings, right?
Shi: What’s wrong?
Mii: Oh, nothing.
[Page 8]
Shi: It’s still pretty early. // Want to watch a movie or something?
Mii: Ah, I’m not really good with movies...
Shi: Why? You don’t like them?
Mii: Oh, it’s not that I don’t like movies, // I just can’t handle movie theaters.
Mii: I mean, // just dark, enclosed spaces in general...
Shi: Huh... // So you’re claustrophobic?
Mii: I had a bit of a panic attack, // once when I got shut in the science prep room at school for a few hours...
[Page 9]
Shi: Woah, that sounds really bad...
Mii: Yeah, but Ookami was there with me, so.
Shi: Ookami...
Mii: We kinda got tricked into getting trapped there,
Mii: but it all worked itself out, so I don’t really mind anymore.
I gripped his hand so hard,
there were marks left from my nails afterwards that looked really painful.
[Page 10]
Sfx: gasp
Why am I thinking about Ookami again?!
Mii: Ah, the food’s getting cold. Let’s eat!
Mii: Thanks for everything today.
Shi: No problem.
Mii: I had a lot of fun. // I feel like I’ve experienced youth!
Shi: That’s great.
[Page 11]
Shi: Hey, // say.
Shi: Are you in love with Ookami?
Mii: What?
Mii: With Ookami? // Me?
Shi: I just got a feeling you might be. // So?
[Page 12]
Mii: No way! // There’s no way I’d like such a weirdo.
Shi: I see. // Then make sure you consider me seriously.
Mii: Consider you?
Shi: Like going out on dates like this,
Shi: eating out together, stuff like that.
Shi: Basically,
Shi: let’s go out for real?
[Page 13]
Let’s go out for real?
Th...that was unexpected.
I’ve never been asked out before...
After having lost so much all at once...
[Page 14]
...those words filled me with a warm feeling. (T/N: lol awkward translation, can’t think of anything better, sorry.)
(Mii and her gran are at a public bathhouse and people are asking about Himawari closing down. Mii says she’s leaving first.)
[Page 15]
Sfx: slide
Oo: The restaurant...
[Page 16]
Oo: You closed it?
Mii: ...Y- // yes.
Oo: Why?
Oo: Because of what happened that day?
[Page 17]
Mii: No, it’s not because of that.
Mii: ...Bye.
Oo: Torisawa.
Oo: Is someone... // ...threatening you?
[Page 18]
Oo: Tell me!
Oo: Something is really off about this.
Oo: Tell me, and I’ll take care of it for you.
Flashback: You get it, right?
Flash: Mii...
Flash: What you’re doing...
[Page 19]
Flash: ...is making things difficult for them.
Mii: I’m not hiding anything?
Mii: Nothing is wrong. // Sensei.
[Page 20]
Hey, Ookami...
It feels like...
...I’m stuck in a tiny, dark room right now...
...and it’s really hard.
[Page 21]
But I can’t reach for your hand this time.
Shi: Oh, // you showed up.
Mii: I always show up. // That’s really my line.
Shi: Right, I guess I haven’t been to school in a while.
[Page 22]
Mii: ...Thank you, // for yesterday.
Shi: You’re not wearing your hair in your usual bun today.
Mii: Nope. I’m trying to mix it up a little.
Shi: Image change? You look nice.
Mii: I get the feeling I need to start changing a little bit at a time, so.
Shi: Oh? // Sounds like a good trend.
Shi: Did you give what I said yesterday some thought while you were at it?
Mii: What you sai... // Oh...
Mii: N-not yet.
Shi: Aw, you’re blushing. // Cuuute.
Mii: S-shut up!
[Page 23]
?: Beniko-chan, // Torisawa-san’s looking pretty happy, isn’t she...
?: She’s with Shishio-kun...
Ben: She is, isn’t she? // Heh...
Ben: That’s no good. // I need to discipline her better...
[Page 24]
?: Discipline? // Did she just say discipline?
?: Are we talking about a dog...?
?: Beniko’s kind of weird, isn’t she?
?: Yeah. I mean, what class is she in, anyway?
?: She just suddenly came and started hanging out in our class.
?: Yeah.
?: She and Torisawa-san are friends, right? // She was the one who told us about the gathering at Torisawa-san’s restaurant and stuff...
?: Ah. // Good morning...
[Page 25]
Oo: ...What you were just saying... // Could you explain?
(Everyone’s all YAY LUNCH.)
Shi: Mii, // did you bring lunch today?
Mii: Yeah.
Shi: You brought some for me too, right?
[Page 26]
Mii: Of course I didn’t. You’re so shameless.
Shi: Whaaat?
Shi: No way. // I’m so hungry I could die.
Mii: …
Shi (in the background): Ahhh I’m going to dieee...
Mii: ...I’m eating lunch with Yayoi-chan on the roof today. // I brought enough food for about three people.
Mii: I guess you could have some.
Shi: Yay! // I was hoping you’d say that.
Shi: Imma head on up to the roof, then.
(Mii: I’m weak to words like, // “I’m starving” and “I’m so hungry I could die”... )
Mii: Ah. // Guess I’ll stop by the bathroom.
Mii: Can’t exactly bring the lunch box into the stall with me... // Hmm.
[Page 27]
Mii: I’ll just leave it here.
(M: I hope it doesn’t fall down... )
Shi: Hey. Glasses-chan.
Yay: Ah, // what was your name again... Lion...
Shi: It’s Shishio.
Yay: Oh, right.
[Page 28]
Huh?
The lunch box is gone.
Mii: Huh?
Mii: What?
Sfx: crash
[Page 29]
Ben: Mii, // I’m sooo sorry.
Ben: I dropped your lunch box.
Mii: Why would you... // That’s so mean...
Ben: Leaving it in the bathroom is unhygienic, you know?
Ben: I heard you shut down the restaurant?
Ben: You must be happy to suddenly have so much free time.
[Page 30]
Mii: Are you... // ...still not satisfied?
Ben: What do you mean?
Ben: Anyway, aren’t you glad you listened to me?
Ben: The other girls won’t be jealous of you anymore, // because of you relationship with those two.
Ben: And now? // Is it Shishio-kun next?
[Page 31]
Ben: You’re so lucky, aren’t you, MIi. // People are practically lining up for the chance to protect you.
Ben: Won’t you tell me your secret?
Ben: You’d better give him up right away. // Shishio-kun’s pretty popular, after all.
Ben: You’ll get isolated again.
[Page 32]
Ben: I’m not saying anything that isn’t true, right?
Ben: This way those two teachers... // ...are still able to stay here and teach.
Ben: Why aren’t you saying anything? // Come on, speak up.
Mii: Beniko.
[Page 33]
Mii: I heard you’ve been going after people who look happy and ruining their lives ever since middle school.
Mii: Did I really look so happy to you?
Mii: ...I used to like Tora.
Mii: But I never had a chance with him, // so I felt really sorry for myself.
[Page 34]
Mii: But now those two have stopped coming, // and the restaurant closed down,
Mii: and I’ve realized how happy I actually was.
Mii: Your plan was a great success, Beniko. // If not for all this, I would never have realized how happy I’ve been.
[Page 35]
Mii: Please,
Mii: do keep it up for as long as you like.
Ben: Hm?
Ben: What are you pretending to be fine for?
Ben: You actually feel like crying, don’t you? // Are you going to run to Shishio-kun in tears after this?
Ben: Hey. // Wait.
[Page 36]
Ben: I’m not done talking!
[Page 37]
///
[Page 38]
Oo: I see.
Oo: So that’s how it is.
Mii: W- // why...
Oo: Are you stupid? // After you made such a face yesterday...
[Page 39]
Oo: You’re pretty impressive. // What was your name again?
Ben: Yesterday...?
Ben: Heh... // So you really have been meeting up in secret.
Ben: That would be a pretty big deal if it got out.
[Page 40]
Oo: Then how about you tell people?
Ben: I’m not just making empty threats, you know.
Ben: I have a picture of you from that time in the park and everything.
Oo: Then show it around.
Mii: Wait, // Oo...
Mii: Sensei.
[Page 41]
Mii: Stop it already. // What do you think I’ve been trying so hard for...
Mii: Sense--
Oo: Stop calling me “sensei”,
Oo: you idiot!
[Page 42]
Oo: You’re pissing me off ten times more than this other girl.
[Page 43]
Oo: I’ve never thought of you as a student even once.
[CH17 END]
Thoughts: Ahhh Beniko is so annoyinnnng go awayyyy. But yay, Ookami stepping it up! And Mii is continually awesome, LET’S ALL APPRECIATE MII’S CHARACTER. She has so much more in her head than just romance, it’s SO REFRESHING.
Code:
(T) - thoughts
(text) - summary
New paragraph = new frame
Also, I shorten long names when indicating who’s speaking (i.e. Oo = Ookami)
[Page 1]
Cover.
[Page 2]
(Note on the door that the restaurant is closed)
Tora: Ookami...
[Page 3]
Tora: I’ll... // ...ask Mii what’s going on.
Oo: Don’t bother.
Tora: But what if it really is our fault?
Oo: Even if it is, // what could we do about it?
Oo: We’re only customers.
[Page 4]
Oo: The owner’s an old woman, // and the shop is worn down.
Oo: For it to disappear is just an instance of natural selection.
Tora: ...Is that really what you think?
Tora: I’m going home.
Tora: You’re a jerk, Ookami.
[Page 5]
Shi: Hey...
Shi: You okay?
Mii: ...Yeah.
Shi: Want to eat something? // It’s 4 o’clock already.
Flashback: It’s okay to cry.
Flash: You’re just a highschool girl, right?
[Page 6]
I cried.
A lot.
And in front of this guy.
Shi: Ah, this is good.
Mii: Yeah. I think this taste is mustard and balsamic vinegar...
Shi: Ohh...
Shi: That’s impressive. Can you tell what the ingredients are from just a taste?
Mii: Oh, I’m sorry. // It’s just a habit!
Shi: Why are you apologizing?
[Page 7]
Mii: We’re in the middle of eating, // and yet I’m analyzing the ingredients and stuff...
Shi: I don’t really mind? // Isn’t this just a part of your personality? It makes you interesting.
Flashback: Personality.
Flash: It’s that thing called personality.
Flash: Everyone’s lacking in some aspects.
Flash: We all live trying to compensate for our short-comings, right?
Shi: What’s wrong?
Mii: Oh, nothing.
[Page 8]
Shi: It’s still pretty early. // Want to watch a movie or something?
Mii: Ah, I’m not really good with movies...
Shi: Why? You don’t like them?
Mii: Oh, it’s not that I don’t like movies, // I just can’t handle movie theaters.
Mii: I mean, // just dark, enclosed spaces in general...
Shi: Huh... // So you’re claustrophobic?
Mii: I had a bit of a panic attack, // once when I got shut in the science prep room at school for a few hours...
[Page 9]
Shi: Woah, that sounds really bad...
Mii: Yeah, but Ookami was there with me, so.
Shi: Ookami...
Mii: We kinda got tricked into getting trapped there,
Mii: but it all worked itself out, so I don’t really mind anymore.
I gripped his hand so hard,
there were marks left from my nails afterwards that looked really painful.
[Page 10]
Sfx: gasp
Why am I thinking about Ookami again?!
Mii: Ah, the food’s getting cold. Let’s eat!
Mii: Thanks for everything today.
Shi: No problem.
Mii: I had a lot of fun. // I feel like I’ve experienced youth!
Shi: That’s great.
[Page 11]
Shi: Hey, // say.
Shi: Are you in love with Ookami?
Mii: What?
Mii: With Ookami? // Me?
Shi: I just got a feeling you might be. // So?
[Page 12]
Mii: No way! // There’s no way I’d like such a weirdo.
Shi: I see. // Then make sure you consider me seriously.
Mii: Consider you?
Shi: Like going out on dates like this,
Shi: eating out together, stuff like that.
Shi: Basically,
Shi: let’s go out for real?
[Page 13]
Let’s go out for real?
Th...that was unexpected.
I’ve never been asked out before...
After having lost so much all at once...
[Page 14]
...those words filled me with a warm feeling. (T/N: lol awkward translation, can’t think of anything better, sorry.)
(Mii and her gran are at a public bathhouse and people are asking about Himawari closing down. Mii says she’s leaving first.)
[Page 15]
Sfx: slide
Oo: The restaurant...
[Page 16]
Oo: You closed it?
Mii: ...Y- // yes.
Oo: Why?
Oo: Because of what happened that day?
[Page 17]
Mii: No, it’s not because of that.
Mii: ...Bye.
Oo: Torisawa.
Oo: Is someone... // ...threatening you?
[Page 18]
Oo: Tell me!
Oo: Something is really off about this.
Oo: Tell me, and I’ll take care of it for you.
Flashback: You get it, right?
Flash: Mii...
Flash: What you’re doing...
[Page 19]
Flash: ...is making things difficult for them.
Mii: I’m not hiding anything?
Mii: Nothing is wrong. // Sensei.
[Page 20]
Hey, Ookami...
It feels like...
...I’m stuck in a tiny, dark room right now...
...and it’s really hard.
[Page 21]
But I can’t reach for your hand this time.
Shi: Oh, // you showed up.
Mii: I always show up. // That’s really my line.
Shi: Right, I guess I haven’t been to school in a while.
[Page 22]
Mii: ...Thank you, // for yesterday.
Shi: You’re not wearing your hair in your usual bun today.
Mii: Nope. I’m trying to mix it up a little.
Shi: Image change? You look nice.
Mii: I get the feeling I need to start changing a little bit at a time, so.
Shi: Oh? // Sounds like a good trend.
Shi: Did you give what I said yesterday some thought while you were at it?
Mii: What you sai... // Oh...
Mii: N-not yet.
Shi: Aw, you’re blushing. // Cuuute.
Mii: S-shut up!
[Page 23]
?: Beniko-chan, // Torisawa-san’s looking pretty happy, isn’t she...
?: She’s with Shishio-kun...
Ben: She is, isn’t she? // Heh...
Ben: That’s no good. // I need to discipline her better...
[Page 24]
?: Discipline? // Did she just say discipline?
?: Are we talking about a dog...?
?: Beniko’s kind of weird, isn’t she?
?: Yeah. I mean, what class is she in, anyway?
?: She just suddenly came and started hanging out in our class.
?: Yeah.
?: She and Torisawa-san are friends, right? // She was the one who told us about the gathering at Torisawa-san’s restaurant and stuff...
?: Ah. // Good morning...
[Page 25]
Oo: ...What you were just saying... // Could you explain?
(Everyone’s all YAY LUNCH.)
Shi: Mii, // did you bring lunch today?
Mii: Yeah.
Shi: You brought some for me too, right?
[Page 26]
Mii: Of course I didn’t. You’re so shameless.
Shi: Whaaat?
Shi: No way. // I’m so hungry I could die.
Mii: …
Shi (in the background): Ahhh I’m going to dieee...
Mii: ...I’m eating lunch with Yayoi-chan on the roof today. // I brought enough food for about three people.
Mii: I guess you could have some.
Shi: Yay! // I was hoping you’d say that.
Shi: Imma head on up to the roof, then.
(Mii: I’m weak to words like, // “I’m starving” and “I’m so hungry I could die”... )
Mii: Ah. // Guess I’ll stop by the bathroom.
Mii: Can’t exactly bring the lunch box into the stall with me... // Hmm.
[Page 27]
Mii: I’ll just leave it here.
(M: I hope it doesn’t fall down... )
Shi: Hey. Glasses-chan.
Yay: Ah, // what was your name again... Lion...
Shi: It’s Shishio.
Yay: Oh, right.
[Page 28]
Huh?
The lunch box is gone.
Mii: Huh?
Mii: What?
Sfx: crash
[Page 29]
Ben: Mii, // I’m sooo sorry.
Ben: I dropped your lunch box.
Mii: Why would you... // That’s so mean...
Ben: Leaving it in the bathroom is unhygienic, you know?
Ben: I heard you shut down the restaurant?
Ben: You must be happy to suddenly have so much free time.
[Page 30]
Mii: Are you... // ...still not satisfied?
Ben: What do you mean?
Ben: Anyway, aren’t you glad you listened to me?
Ben: The other girls won’t be jealous of you anymore, // because of you relationship with those two.
Ben: And now? // Is it Shishio-kun next?
[Page 31]
Ben: You’re so lucky, aren’t you, MIi. // People are practically lining up for the chance to protect you.
Ben: Won’t you tell me your secret?
Ben: You’d better give him up right away. // Shishio-kun’s pretty popular, after all.
Ben: You’ll get isolated again.
[Page 32]
Ben: I’m not saying anything that isn’t true, right?
Ben: This way those two teachers... // ...are still able to stay here and teach.
Ben: Why aren’t you saying anything? // Come on, speak up.
Mii: Beniko.
[Page 33]
Mii: I heard you’ve been going after people who look happy and ruining their lives ever since middle school.
Mii: Did I really look so happy to you?
Mii: ...I used to like Tora.
Mii: But I never had a chance with him, // so I felt really sorry for myself.
[Page 34]
Mii: But now those two have stopped coming, // and the restaurant closed down,
Mii: and I’ve realized how happy I actually was.
Mii: Your plan was a great success, Beniko. // If not for all this, I would never have realized how happy I’ve been.
[Page 35]
Mii: Please,
Mii: do keep it up for as long as you like.
Ben: Hm?
Ben: What are you pretending to be fine for?
Ben: You actually feel like crying, don’t you? // Are you going to run to Shishio-kun in tears after this?
Ben: Hey. // Wait.
[Page 36]
Ben: I’m not done talking!
[Page 37]
///
[Page 38]
Oo: I see.
Oo: So that’s how it is.
Mii: W- // why...
Oo: Are you stupid? // After you made such a face yesterday...
[Page 39]
Oo: You’re pretty impressive. // What was your name again?
Ben: Yesterday...?
Ben: Heh... // So you really have been meeting up in secret.
Ben: That would be a pretty big deal if it got out.
[Page 40]
Oo: Then how about you tell people?
Ben: I’m not just making empty threats, you know.
Ben: I have a picture of you from that time in the park and everything.
Oo: Then show it around.
Mii: Wait, // Oo...
Mii: Sensei.
[Page 41]
Mii: Stop it already. // What do you think I’ve been trying so hard for...
Mii: Sense--
Oo: Stop calling me “sensei”,
Oo: you idiot!
[Page 42]
Oo: You’re pissing me off ten times more than this other girl.
[Page 43]
Oo: I’ve never thought of you as a student even once.
[CH17 END]
Thoughts: Ahhh Beniko is so annoyinnnng go awayyyy. But yay, Ookami stepping it up! And Mii is continually awesome, LET’S ALL APPRECIATE MII’S CHARACTER. She has so much more in her head than just romance, it’s SO REFRESHING.